Thursday, 1 April 2010

The Final Piece

1 comment:

  1. This is on the right lines and I like the fact that it's energetic and fun which will appeal to the target audience. However there are some serios flaws that must be addressed.
    1. The varied fonts don't work. They confuse the eye.
    2. Date? Price?
    3. 3 main colours? (standard convention of front covers.
    4. Bar code?
    5. Whole school news?
    6. Logo/slogan?

    I wuld polish this piece and make some improvements. This is getting there but I wouldn't say it is completed.

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